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« on: June 05, 2006, 08:47:34 PM » |
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This SO Story has been removed per prior instructions. if you want to read it again please find it in the book.
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« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2006, 09:07:56 PM » |
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like how you included DDD in there  yay i feal spshial then and again we were and still are a major factor of holding dday for as long as possible |
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« Reply #2 on: June 05, 2006, 09:33:11 PM » |
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don't worry, you should see where you come in. as for TH, how they come in, you'll have to wait and see --edit: well, up to third chapter now, what do you guys think? |
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« Reply #3 on: June 05, 2006, 11:09:36 PM » |
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real nice i am honerd to be placed as a threat.. cause im sure you all know how the DDD works :p we pretty much terrorize to make sure that noone joins the Dday reasherer
like it ars mostly the part with me in it :p
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« Reply #4 on: June 06, 2006, 04:48:46 AM » |
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SWEEE! I have a staring role...and it's accurate! Great job ars. Much more SO related then my story...(P.S. Be on the look out Space Odyssey-When stars collide, arriving soon in the SpaceO Story section nearest you)
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« Reply #5 on: June 06, 2006, 09:54:35 AM » |
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omg we have a store? just stop monkey...
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« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2006, 10:24:55 AM » |
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lol, lammalord.
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« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2006, 02:54:46 PM » |
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well, which would be more believable, going after a DDay device and finding one of you there, or not finding one fo you there? to not have you be somewhere along there would either mean we missed you -or- I just completely ignore your entire alliance. and as for TH, I think it can safely be said that when we do end up joining up, some heads start rolling lol. and ya, seither, of course I had you in there. can't be talking to myself the WHOLE time, can I? ... ah, nevermind  |
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« Reply #8 on: June 06, 2006, 03:06:37 PM » |
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lol, very funny ars.
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« Reply #9 on: June 06, 2006, 04:28:48 PM » |
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hay when we hear dday devise the ddd has to be somewere lurking near by ready to slice som1's thoat
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« Reply #10 on: June 06, 2006, 08:21:02 PM » |
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ya, I know you all like that suprise ending there, don't ya? I mean , who would have expected that, huh? LOL. jk, I just put that in there as a gag for anyone reading it  then they can sit there trying to peice together the 2 seemingly completely unrelated topics  oh wait... they are unrelated.  lol |
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« Reply #11 on: June 07, 2006, 12:43:30 AM » |
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lol, random unrelated things are fun!
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« Reply #12 on: June 07, 2006, 03:28:54 AM » |
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Yea, I really like how it picks up starting on line 115 (I included the lines with no text in my count).
Anyway, good start.
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« Reply #13 on: June 07, 2006, 03:22:49 PM » |
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yea, and I see you used the same format as my story's title, so those who aren't paying attention might think I've made a new one.....clever.
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« Reply #14 on: June 08, 2006, 05:57:34 AM » |
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It's pretty good Ars, I read it.
You could continue with the outcome of the alien invasion, hwo and if they spread in the Galaxy, and if they can be eradicated or supressed, culminating with finding out they are hiding in a paralel universe just just beneath our own. They found a disruption in the foundation of the two universes, caused by the biggest black hole ever to be seen.
Enevtually, we find out they are more like us then we think, as they they managed to destroy every other species in their galaxy too, and consumed all the resources.
Now, they are building bases in the very foundation of hyperspace, serving as links and access points to the Galaxy... The events are yet to be uncovered...
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