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Author Topic: Galactic History....A time of peace.What will happen next?  (Read 8870 times)
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« Reply #15 on: June 02, 2006, 07:24:12 PM »

wish i had the concentration to write something
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« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2006, 04:03:13 AM »

U dont really need to concentrate just make some more up as you go along,
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If practice makes perfect, but nobodies perfect, why practice?
Someone look at my story its the galactic history pleeez everyones loosing interest....
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« Reply #17 on: June 03, 2006, 03:53:16 PM »

:p naa ill stick to useing photoshop lol i sceem to be okay in that
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« Reply #18 on: June 05, 2006, 08:17:07 PM »

just a little note here, before you go confusing anyone else, DDay Device is what is used to wipe out things on a galactic scale.  what you just described is more or less called the stellar converter. (again, from emi's little story he had)

anyway, other then that, pretty cool.  oh, one other thing, just so you know, I did find one error that really bugged me when I saw it:

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Chapter 5

MeanWhile.........
"You Highness, we've picked up Human and Dicluo life on the border of the sector, exact coordinates, 999-556-457." Said a Human looking lifeform,"Good, all isss going according to plan." Hissed a voice from the sssshadowssss," Have  the Pirrl Goro Titanssss, engage them, make them aim for the youmanssss."
"But, your Highness, there are not enogh Titans to destroy the Humans let alone thier Dicluo allies, we will,""NO" boomed the voice from the shadows,"We will max our profit and effiency if we have lessss Pirrl Goro sssscum to pay, we merely want to weaken the youmanssss,"
"Uhh....y...yee ok sorry your..h..h..highness"
"Leave minion."
The Human looking lifeform left the dark, creepy room and headed to the bridge to relay his orders.

if you notice, this is in between the person speaking, when it should be describing where the voice is coming from, which also means (and this is what bugged me) take the extra S's before and after the word shadows.
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« Reply #19 on: June 06, 2006, 01:25:57 AM »

yeah d**n thats coz I got the idea after I wrote thatand I just added sssss to everything srrry my bad.
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« Reply #20 on: June 06, 2006, 04:43:30 AM »

well, just go and fix it, lol. Simple as that.
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« Reply #21 on: June 18, 2006, 05:03:33 AM »

READ THIS TOPIC
Everyone losing interest! PLZ don't!I'm adding new stuff now and have been for a while,
I haven't had a post for a few weeks now.....
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« Reply #22 on: June 20, 2006, 02:04:27 AM »

you need to post when you add new stuff for people to read it.
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« Reply #23 on: June 20, 2006, 02:16:41 AM »

Ok then I'll do that , But I won't have much spare time at the moment, starting my d**n art GCSE.
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« Reply #24 on: June 20, 2006, 02:19:15 AM »

lol, watch the language. I don't care if you used * instead.
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