ok, guys, this is the beggining of the whole The Dark Ones story. it deals with how The Dark One became a leader of a clan. which will eventually won't be a clan. so just tell me what you think. if you have to email me about it so i can improve it please.
Der_Dunkle@hotmail.comso please help me on what you think.
"When it all began"
6,000,000,000 b.c.
At the birth of time, way before any record of life and earth, lived only two beings. The gods and the most ancient peoples in and out of space and time, the Elementals. These people, these Elementals, worshipped the 4 elements: fire, water, earth, and air the basis of all life. Without these four elements, life could never exist. These elements were kept in temples right off the edge of time. The gods became upset that these beings did not worship them, and started to kill them to show their dominance. But the elementals pleaded and told the gods that the 4 elements were their gods. And said that they were the key to everything and that all the gods and the Elementals survival depended on the elements. they are the strongest force that will ever exist, except one. The gods confused did not take their warning and kill all the Elementals on sight.
Years later they tried to create a race. This race would be their first attempt to try and create life.This race would be a race that would worship them. the attempts failed and some gods died. After trying and failing many times they were lead to the idea that they didn't have the power to create anything.But they did not want to believe it. In their anger they went to the temples of the elements and lashed out at them. 10 of thousands to millions and billions of gods if not more struck the elements in their original forms, and tried to destroy them. but the elements absorbed many of the attacks making and keeping the powers as their own, gathering wisdom and more power. until soon the gods themselves were as pitiful mortals and would wither in the presence of the elements.
But when tired the gods asked the elements how could it be. why could they not create life. a man came from the shadows. when he made it into the center of the room, the gods saw him, and opened attack. But of course the elements felt the power, and put up a mass energy field in front of him protecting him and taking in their powers yet again. he began to speak to the gods, telling them how they could not defeat the elements for they were too strong, even before they had taken the gods powers. but the gods barked at him demanding him to be quiet and said that a minor being should not be addressing the gods in person. but he shouted back at the gods saying they did not take the warning given to them from his people about the elements. and he told them once again:
"The elements themselves are gods. they are the basis of all Life, the key to building life. without the elements you cannot have life. So they can never be destroyed. they are stronger than any power combined or single. but say one."
He then told them that without the elements the gods would wither and die. the gods ignoring his warning again started out of the temple. and as they began out, he ran out to tell them, that with the power of the elements they could create life. the gods all smiled and turned to strike him. a few seconds later he fell.
soon after this conversation the gods tried to take control the elements. but they failed and the elements killed many of the gods. after many tries the gods convened with the dark powers and asked if they would try and help control the elements. after days of conversing the powers agreed. when the gods and demons struck, the demons used forbidden magic to try and suck and destroy the elements power, but this failed and killed many demons and gods. sick of the gods uprising the elements joined together and formed what looked like an Elemental man. This elemental man spoke, and said, that there was a temple farther away from anything, everything that it was between the two realms. no one would ever find it. inside of it was this being. and this being while asleep, he is unharmable, and more dangerous than when he is awake. being unstable. but the gods uneasy rushed to ask how he could be awakened. and the elements said:
"this being is more anceint that you gods and us elementals, even if our lives were combined he would beat us in life time. he is the basis of all life. he created us. for he is all the elements in one. a supreme bring, a higher power, the chosen one."
The elements told them that he could only be awakened by the elements themselves. the gods begged the elements to awaken him and have him do favors for the them. the elements said that he is no slave and is far too strong to be controlled. but is not evil. he is purely neutral. he did not attack evil, he did not attack good. but he only did good. the gods said that they would give him the wisdom of all magic, and the elements told them that when awakened he would be given all the knowledge of the elements. The gods did not care, they just wanted him to help them create a race. the elements agreed. soon the temple filled with wind and the elements sent out a depth charge killing many gods. this shockwave smashed the ice cell this being was in. and he was awoken. when he sook out the gods, they gave him their wisdom of magic. they told him what they wanted. and he begunth the work. he created trillions of galaxies and planets. many with different forms of life. but none as unique as Organismo. (word which from ancient meaning means planet of life. or seeds of life) on this planet he made more lushous forests and crushed the land with a giant ancient sword of unknown power and material. this planet had giant oceans, and many smaller bodies of water. Later he put on many invisable outer sheilds to protect the planet on the outside. When he was done, he figured that the planets could be better for supporting many other plants and terrain. so he put a massive fireball in each galaxy. These would provide more heat and make better climates. he began creating creatures on other planets before his unique ones. these creatures were based on climates.
When he finally got to the unique planets, he thought of a more unique way to spark life. a single cell, that would be unduplicable. it would change, and there would be many different species that would spark off this cell. the cells the sparked off would be able to duplicate themselves. gods laughed at his idea. and felt that he would not be strong enough even with the elements to make a plan that complicated come true. but he summoned a huge sphere and from it came a tiny, microscopic cell. and in seconds it multiplied and spawned more species than any other planets he made. when all the planets he chose had life, he started molding the races. finally the birth of Organismo was complete. The gods called the planet Earth, meaning soil, ground. but basically land.
While molding the races, the Elemental being, thought that the gods wanted a race to worship them. so he did this favor for them. he made a bipedal species. he called them Humascius. But before he was finished the gods wanted to set rules they made into the world. he agreed. so the gods set on earth, in a sheltered space, a box. this box contained the cure to population on this planet. they called it Pandora's Box. it carried the plague, to keep the civilizations small and easy to manage. this upset him. he now felt that the gods put the box on earth because they felt he could not handle the managment of the race he made. so he sent himself into the dark realm of the gods and pleaded with the prince of darkness to give him the power. but he refused. so he began to slaughter demons, sucking the power and wisdom from them. and soon he was filled with the power of evil and good. so the gods struck him trying to kill him. but when he got back up more of the gods struck, then more joined, and more, and more, and more until trillions struck out at him at once. but he did the one thing they expected him not to do. Strike back!! he lashed out at them killing more than half of the. and thus doing this he made two places in time. the powers of good he used created a heaven, and the dark magic created a hell. the gods feared this and went to the temple of the elements.
When they were there they saw the elements weakened and asked for help. they basically said that the gods betrayed them. and they do not deserve saving. but the gods told them that he could transport between the realms. the elements said they would help one last time. but they would die and the supreme element would gain the leftover wisdom. for what they were going to do had to be even. the gods agreed.
the elements summoned 4 men in the temple. they were strong as gods, but weaker than the supreme being. the gods asked how they would help. and the elements said, they are elementals. he will use them as accomiders. and know of them already, they are smart as divine scholars. but together do not equal the power of the 5th one. the gods did not understand, but accepted. the elements froze themselves on chambers in the temple just barely alive.
when the gods used these 4 to help them try and kill him, he suddenly appeared in the temple behind them. and said that they had started a fight they could not win. and when he showed them his mark the gods realized his heart was torn in two. half evil, half good. but evil would slowly take over if he was not calmed. so they again struck him. but he absorbed many attacks and deflected the others. and hit the 4 elementals. but they got back up. Immortals they were. the gods stare in awe. 5 immortals all strong. and one more stronger than the gods could ever be. this was not good.
After they fled the temple. the supreme elemental started slaughtering gods, by randomly teleporting all around them and killing them. he was everywhere. and when he summoned a giant shaodow, he moved unseen. this granted him the ability to move as fast as light, and be deadly.
when the gods said that there were too many to kill all of them, he said that he didn't want to kill them all. just to prove they were afraid. and they all snickered saying no. so he inflicted a plague on the Humascius race. he gave them hatred, fear, anger, sadness, anxiety, sickness. everything the gods did not want them to have. they cried out in anquish. saying that they were actually indeed afraid. they told him to stop and leave them in peace. he said that he would never leave. he told them, they were enemies from here on, and took the other 4 elementals to ride with him 'till the end of time. from this day forth the gods and demons called him:
The Dark One
