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Fan Art & Fiction => Spaceo Story => Topic started by: Seither on May 31, 2006, 10:11:02 PM



Title: Removed for publication
Post by: Seither on May 31, 2006, 10:11:02 PM
removed for publishing.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 04:13:29 AM
first off waaaaaaaaaay to long i only read like the first weird and feel asleep, u kneeed to ummm like start off with like a action word like baaaamm waaaaam woooooow kinda thing ok, then come on those pics are completly stoling from other sources so how does that tell us if this story is even originally urs ??? that right we dont becouse if u stole the pics u prolly stole this story!

Smee



would like to add that "WARNING!!!!!!! MAY CAUSE ASSSLEEPNEESS SYNDROME"

was my creative thinking just had to point that out ^^


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 04:16:32 AM
A, i stole the story from where? the pictures are there because I wrote this for an assignment for my Science-Fiction literature class and he required we put in pictures. So yes, the pistures aren't mine, but the story is.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 04:19:04 AM
mmmmmmmhhmmmmm ok id like to see prof of that Sr.
thats wat i thought cant can u ^^


lol


smee


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 04:20:05 AM
You want my teacher's email? He'll back me up.

Stop giving me a hard time Smee. You know I wouldn't do something like take another person's work. i hate people who do that. The pictures were allowed to be from elsewhere, and like i'm going to try to make my own, I suck at that.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 04:26:05 AM
oh yea ur TEACHERS email it will probably looke somthin like Sietherteacher@hotmail.com probably

like imma fall for that no Sir


Smee


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 04:29:58 AM
no, actually, the second half of the address would be @ohdela.schoolone.com, which is my school. Ohdela Alternate Learning Academy. www.ohdela.com is their site.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 04:32:00 AM
id go but it sounds like a dirty site so id better not i dont want none of that spyware that goes around.



Smeee










lol :12:


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 04:33:25 AM
ol, well, I gave you all the proof you need. Choose to deny if you wish, I care not, because finally, Jesus has come to SO (refer to Smee's story for details...or detaillessness)


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 04:35:23 AM
and if u think about it this was all spam ahahah


:spam:


Smee


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 04:37:40 AM
yes/no, as it did pertain to my story indirectly (the questioning of it's authinticity)


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 04:39:25 AM
nope it was spam

:spam:


i was BS with u lol


Smee


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 04:41:52 AM
Figures. Oh well, maybe the posting will atract people and they'll read and review my story....finally. Only 5 people have read the thing all the way through, 1 of which doesn't play this game.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Smee on June 02, 2006, 05:04:10 AM
Wish i had 4 thumbs to give it 4 thumbs down :thumbsdown: :thumbsdown: :thumbsdown: :thumbsdown:


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 05:06:03 AM
haha, very funny. you haven't even read the whole thing yet.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: deathStar1337 on June 02, 2006, 06:09:54 AM
 :wow: that was an AWSOME! story luffy. would make a great movie/mini series. but i want to know hwat happens next? were they obliterated in the explosion kboom  or did they make it to the other side? guess i'll just have to wait till next season to see what new escapades you two get upto  :thumbsup:


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 06:49:03 AM
yes, yes you will. There are clues left in the story hinting at what happened.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Lammalord on June 02, 2006, 09:12:19 AM
oh oh its on page 2 now, can we get the second page, pretty cool story ingore Smee is a stubid head

wow your a really good righter, i never had the skill to do that, but appernly i know photoshop :p


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: shaneblack on June 02, 2006, 10:28:48 AM
Daaaaaamn, if you could write a whole book with that kinda stuff in it (which I'm sure you can!)
You'd get soo rich and famous.....
Man that was great that warnings pointless, if anyone fell asleep through that they'd have to have a problem.
 You                       Smee
:rifle:                   :oops: :sorry:
All you readers and adoring fans who want more!!!!!
 :cheers: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
:notworthy: :notworthy: :notworthy: :notworthy:
WE WANT
MORE MORE

ShaneBlack


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 02, 2006, 01:37:24 PM
Relax, as soon as I finish chapter's 3 and 4 for my book (I am writing one, not SO related though. You can find it on my site (click the world icon, it'll wisk you to it), as well as a couple other things I've written (this is up there too, just without the pictures) I'll be starting another, though it'll be from another person's view most likely. And What Smee meant by falling asleep, and my waring, is that this is a long story for a forum. I'd give you an estimation of when I'll have it up, but with me, I never know.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Lammalord on June 02, 2006, 07:22:20 PM
wow you area a good writer :p


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 06, 2006, 04:59:17 AM
Thank you. Space Odyssey-When Stars Collide should be up shortly. Be on the look out for it!


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Lammalord on June 06, 2006, 09:51:46 AM
i cheak for a new additon every 2 or so hours :P nothing yet :S


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 06, 2006, 10:26:20 AM
Not THAT soon, it takes some time to write these things, and edit it. I'd say by the weekend at the earliest, as I have other things to do.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Lammalord on June 06, 2006, 04:30:06 PM
has it been a weekend yet?


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Ramagar on June 06, 2006, 10:01:45 PM
Wow...i love it.  Very well done, i applaude you and your creative ability. i hate to say this, really i do, but i think since this takes place in space, the distances at the end (the ones measured in yards) should be increased slightly. Say, lightminutes instead of yards. in space, yards is nothing. just thought i'd point that out. i know, i know, tiny detail...many apoligies...


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 07, 2006, 12:42:35 AM
It is meant to be yards, I thought it over carefully.  It fits...trust me. I can't say more, or I'll be giving away stuff in my next one.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Ramagar on June 07, 2006, 09:23:28 AM
meant to be in yards...? Ahhh! when is the next part coming out!?!?! now i am curious


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 07, 2006, 03:19:32 PM
Hopefully this weekend, provided I get some more time to write. I've been busy with real life as of late, haven't had much time to do writing, but I'm trying my hardest to get it out in time, don't you worry.

Btw, the next one coming out (Space Odyssey-When Stars Collide) is going to be told from Seither's view again. I may switch for the one after that though, not sure yet.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Lammalord on June 07, 2006, 06:12:38 PM
real life pist who has that?

one day of school left.. not only that but i get out at like 10 am cant wait!


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 07, 2006, 08:32:33 PM
wow, that's awesome! congrats dude.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: SirEmi on June 09, 2006, 08:43:07 PM
I read the whole thing, good story, couldn't be taken from somewhere, it has toooo much SO in it lol


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on June 10, 2006, 01:57:41 AM
Thanks Sir Emi, I am honored you liked it. Yea, Smee was just giving me a hard time.

for my...fans I guess is the word, kinda ackward to say that, but anyway. there *may* be a slight set back on the release of Space Odyssey-When Stars Collide, due to the fact that I have summer classes and need to get some work done for them. But I expect it shouldn't be more then a day or two, provided you guys not minding I not put pictures in this time (because the first one was written for a science fiction class, the pictures were required, and I figured I'd add them, just so you could see the original). If you d want pictures, it'll be a while longer cause I'd have to find them, and it usually isn't easy.

But it'll be out soon either way, so make sure to have some snacks ready, and a decent slot of free time, lol. From the looks of it, it'll be longer then this one is.


Title: Re: Space Odyssey-A Tale of a Thief
Post by: Seither on September 18, 2006, 01:51:00 PM
Bump, just so those who wish to can read where it all started before #3 in the Space Odyssey Trilogy comes to it's spectacular close.