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Title: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on February 17, 2009, 08:50:30 PM Hey! Sadly Monkey is not the ONLY person to pick up writing. I think spaceo gave us to darn many ideas. So if anyone ever gets the time, check what I got so far. Only the first 2 chapters have been edited (by others) but from the reviews I got, it's still pretty darn good.
Now, it's not about vampires. (I use the word vampire the same way someone could tell a 16th century man a cell phone is magic) Well, Look it up! It currently has 16 (short) chapters. Enjoy! Link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2626028/1 Summary: A girl starts changing. She evolves, gets massive power and decides she wants to use it to change the world. To fix it. Now of course this idea of hers will never work but she goes for it anyways. The result: the fourth world war. Not exactly what she intended. The war is later named after her and most of the blood shed is in her name. Next thing you know every superpower wants her on their side and it turns into a war of execution. A war of assassins and silent murders. corruption and the seeking of power. All of this made possible by the number one tool of murder. Her. Why can't she stop this madness? No one knows why she doesn’t stop letting the world get thrust into madness. Letting it get thrown into the bloodiest war of humanity - The Vampire War. Current Chapters: 1 Sobs 2 Case of a Lifetime 3 I can Read 4 Look What I can Do 5 That was Unexpected 6 I can Control You 7 My First Love 8 Changes 9 Vampire 10 Sean's Dumb Idea 11 Sean's Brilliant Escape 12 Explaining 13 Road to Recovery 14 First Blood 15 Ghoul 16 Him 17 Arrested 18 The Start of Something Big 19 Enter: The Wizard 20 Blood Sucker 21 Running Away 22 You Can't Hide 23 Forest Painted Red 24 History of the Darth 25 Chainmail 26 The Undead is Everywhere 27 Risen Sire Zee Colde 28 Those who Fight 29 White eyes 30 Wardrobe 31 Death of a Perfectly Good Bathroom Stall 32 The Reverse Effect 33 TV 34 Sin and The d**ned Queen 35 You're Not Allowed Anymore 36 Bullets 37 Airport 38 Airplane 39 The Long and Boring Trip 40 What is Going on in Russia 41 I Met the Big Guy 42 Miscalculation 43 The Sahara Desert 44 Strike Zone 45 Pre Slaughter Meditation 46 Security and the Bloody Mess 47 The Deal is Off 48 Courtyard Massacre 49 The Trip to Hell 50 The Devils Mark 51 Calm 52 Tearing Fingers 53 Dead Caravan 54 To Perm 55 Perm Size: 70,179 words. Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on February 18, 2009, 07:35:13 PM Interesting website and I like your first chapter will read the second later.
Edit: Um did I just complement LammaLord? Kenquinn Glaces out the window behind him, he sighs in relief for the sky is still blue Armageddon is not upon us. Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on February 18, 2009, 08:39:10 PM Hey! thanks for looking it up :)
It better be darn good ;) i try very hard lol. and, well keep an eye out on the sky for me lol. Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on June 30, 2009, 05:27:28 AM bump!
edit* - yah yah yah double posting is bad blaw blaw blaw - no point in making a new topic when one is already here! "Posted on: February 17, 2009" this story has gone from about 8 chapters when it was posted to now 49 chapters. if you started reading it before and liked it - check it out again, its gotten A LOT bigger, and of course even better!! Current Chapters: 1 Sobs 2 Case of a Lifetime 3 I can Read 4 Look What I can Do 5 That was Unexpected 6 I can Control You 7 My First Love 8 Changes 9 Vampire 10 Sean's Dumb Idea 11 Sean's Brilliant Escape 12 Explaining 13 Road to Recovery 14 First Blood 15 Ghoul 16 Him 17 Arrested 18 The Start of Something Big 19 Enter: The Wizard 20 Blood Sucker 21 Running Away 22 You Can't Hide 23 Forest Painted Red 24 History of the Darth 25 Chainmail 26 The Undead is Everywhere 27 Risen Sire Zee Colde 28 Those who Fight 29 White eyes 30 Wardrobe 31 Death of a Perfectly Good Bathroom Stall 32 The Reverse Effect 33 TV 34 Sin and The d**ned Queen 35 You're Not Allowed Anymore 36 Bullets 37 Airport 38 Airplane 39 The Long and Boring Trip 40 What is Going on in Russia 41 I Met the Big Guy 42 Miscalculation 43 The Sahara Desert 44 Strike Zone 45 Pre Slaughter Meditation 46 Security and the Bloody Mess 47 The Deal is Off 48 Courtyard Massacre 49 The Trip to Hell Size: 62,284 words. Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on June 30, 2009, 06:03:03 PM Doubple posting does not matter here..... And ill have to start reading it again I stopped around Chapter 7
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Fester on July 01, 2009, 08:49:11 AM Lost most of a day at work reading it, can you please do some more now!!!
If you can find an artist it would make an excellent Graphic Novel, Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on July 02, 2009, 12:08:24 AM Chapters: 50 - Words: 63,660 Type faster Lammalord..... Should be doing 10k words a day :12:
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on July 13, 2009, 02:54:07 PM I got up to 56 written now, up to 52 posted.
I got stuck though for a bit and haven't written anything for a week now :p as for the story, I'd say it just hit the middle, another 60,000 or so words and its the end :D a nice 120,000 unedited lacking detail story ready for a second draft... and thats about the normal size for a book now-a-days... though it will probably end up 40-50k bigger after detail is added in. EDIT 50 The Devils Mark 51 Calm 52 Tearing Fingers Size: 66,040 words. Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on July 14, 2009, 11:13:13 PM Hum when your done the last chapter ill read it and tell you everything thats wrong with it.
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on July 22, 2009, 07:08:55 AM EDIT
53 Dead Caravan 54 To Perm 55 Perm Size: 70,179 words. Keep on reading! Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on July 25, 2009, 12:06:56 AM EDIT I'm not reading ti right now so how could i keep on reading it?53 Dead Caravan 54 To Perm 55 Perm Size: 70,179 words. Keep on reading! Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on November 26, 2009, 11:36:40 PM chapters 4-68 have been removed, SORRY!
Reason posted on Chapter 4 Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on November 27, 2009, 01:22:44 AM chapters 4-68 have been removed, SORRY! Nice can you tell us which one? Aka which publisher requested you remove it?Reason posted on Chapter 4 Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on December 11, 2009, 01:22:32 PM its a self publishing company called Iuniverse - something like a 'last resort' if i can't find a good deal otherwise. nothing special. But the point is that a publishing company said 'remove it' - at this point i don't care which one... it was okay to have say 100-150 pages of the book up online but his statement did have some truth... having 300+ pages of a book online at this point was a bit.. much.
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: deezee66 on December 20, 2009, 05:38:47 PM I read your 1st 4 chapters today and seems quite good for a 1st draft :thumbsup:
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on March 01, 2010, 02:49:29 AM i got 2nd drafts of all 4 chapters... if you think what I've got up now is good you're missing out :p
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: V on March 01, 2010, 02:53:16 PM located... where?
Title: Re: World War Four The Vampire Wars Post by: Lammalord on March 01, 2010, 05:29:30 PM located... where? You'd think I'd posted edited drafts online!?!? LOL LOL!!! they staying away from the web... if anyone wants to see the edited drafts (4-5x better than the current drafts) They'll just have to buy the book when it comes out :p |