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Title: Spelling/Grammar Errors and Ways to make things Clearer(Move To Suggestions?) Post by: KenquinnTheInsaneOne on May 31, 2008, 09:54:14 PM I thought I'd start to make a list just for fun who knows they might be fixed
1: In the Secret Asteroid Base page it says: Gold Bonus doubled your growth and interest rate Should be: Gold Bonus doubles your growth and interest rate 2: After that it says: Interest increases by 0.01% for every 100 million, up to 10% for 100 billion, if you have more then that it will start to decrease by 0.01% for every 100 million you gain, to a minimum of 2% per day. Values are for Gold members, for others there interest and growth are half those values. 3: On the SO Wars Build Facility Page it says: BioFarms are the main source of income to new commanders, every biofarm will generate 10 cr/turn from trading organic resources It should be: BioFarms are the main source of income to new commanders, every biofarm will generate 30 cr/turn from trading organic resources I reported this one to Sir Emi when the war server started 4: Where it says how many turns you have left there is a extra space between the number of turns you have and the word turns. For example: You have 849 turn(s) left. 54 turn(s) used. It should be: You have 849 turn(s) left. 54 turn(s) used. Yes I know who gives a @%##!#$ about 1 too many spaces but I thought I'd add it More to come from me and hopfully other users Feel free to make suggestions on how best to word these sentences |