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Title: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on June 05, 2006, 08:47:34 PM This SO Story has been removed per prior instructions. if you want to read it again please find it in the book.
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Lammalord on June 05, 2006, 09:07:56 PM like how you included DDD in there :D yay i feal spshial then and again we were and still are a major factor of holding dday for as long as possible
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on June 05, 2006, 09:33:11 PM don't worry, you should see where you come in. as for TH, how they come in, you'll have to wait and see :D
--edit: well, up to third chapter now, what do you guys think? Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Lammalord on June 05, 2006, 11:09:36 PM real nice i am honerd to be placed as a threat.. cause im sure you all know how the DDD works :p we pretty much terrorize to make sure that noone joins the Dday reasherer
like it ars mostly the part with me in it :p Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Seither on June 06, 2006, 04:48:46 AM SWEEE! I have a staring role...and it's accurate! Great job ars. Much more SO related then my story...(P.S. Be on the look out Space Odyssey-When stars collide, arriving soon in the SpaceO Story section nearest you)
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Lammalord on June 06, 2006, 09:54:35 AM omg we have a store? just stop monkey...
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Seither on June 06, 2006, 10:24:55 AM lol, lammalord.
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on June 06, 2006, 02:54:46 PM well, which would be more believable, going after a DDay device and finding one of you there, or not finding one fo you there? to not have you be somewhere along there would either mean we missed you -or- I just completely ignore your entire alliance. and as for TH, I think it can safely be said that when we do end up joining up, some heads start rolling :) lol.
and ya, seither, of course I had you in there. can't be talking to myself the WHOLE time, can I? ... ah, nevermind :)) Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Seither on June 06, 2006, 03:06:37 PM lol, very funny ars.
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Lammalord on June 06, 2006, 04:28:48 PM hay when we hear dday devise the ddd has to be somewere lurking near by ready to slice som1's thoat
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on June 06, 2006, 08:21:02 PM ya, I know you all like that suprise ending there, don't ya? I mean , who would have expected that, huh? LOL. :)) jk, I just put that in there as a gag for anyone reading it :14: then they can sit there trying to peice together the 2 seemingly completely unrelated topics :21: oh wait... :21: they are unrelated. :sweat lol
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Seither on June 07, 2006, 12:43:30 AM lol, random unrelated things are fun!
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: charmuska on June 07, 2006, 03:28:54 AM Yea, I really like how it picks up starting on line 115 (I included the lines with no text in my count).
Anyway, good start. Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Seither on June 07, 2006, 03:22:49 PM yea, and I see you used the same format as my story's title, so those who aren't paying attention might think I've made a new one.....clever.
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: SirEmi on June 08, 2006, 05:57:34 AM It's pretty good Ars, I read it.
You could continue with the outcome of the alien invasion, hwo and if they spread in the Galaxy, and if they can be eradicated or supressed, culminating with finding out they are hiding in a paralel universe just just beneath our own. They found a disruption in the foundation of the two universes, caused by the biggest black hole ever to be seen. Enevtually, we find out they are more like us then we think, as they they managed to destroy every other species in their galaxy too, and consumed all the resources. Now, they are building bases in the very foundation of hyperspace, serving as links and access points to the Galaxy... The events are yet to be uncovered... Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on June 08, 2006, 09:10:25 PM lol, hey thanks E, actually I was thinking of trying to make it a sort of story you could use as how the reavers and such were found out... but don't worry, I have my plans on what is to come L:) I just have to sit down and write the rest of it. lol. now then, how to depict the upcoming battle scene :21: hmm... B-)
but this is turning out to be so long, I might end up splitting it up or... something. clicking on the link to find a mile long web page is probably the alst thing anyone wants, lol. Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Lammalord on June 08, 2006, 11:31:30 PM dont forget to put more ddd in! :D i want to find out what i do :P
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on June 08, 2006, 11:46:01 PM LOL, yes, I get to control what you do in the story... *considers a revision with lammalord doing the macarana on the front of his mothership* :wow: on second thought, maybe not...
anyway, it is now finished. along with a sort of resolution at the end putting all the rest of the pieces together. lol. Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Lammalord on June 08, 2006, 11:56:28 PM ouch that things strong!!!
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: Seither on June 10, 2006, 02:07:51 AM Nice job ars. I say A for quality and a + for effort, making your grade an A+.
Title: Re: Space Odyssey - The Alien Encounter Post by: ars68 on October 26, 2006, 12:24:25 PM A+? :)) I feel so smart now L:)
anyway, for my reason of posting in this long forgotten thread: I have now begun a second story coming after this one, tying this one with Seither's stories (well, his 2nd and possibly 3rd ones) it shall be interesting seeing where this goes... so when I come out with the second, and people go 'huh? :confused:' they know where it is coming from easier, lol. |