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Title: DEEP HISTORY
Post by: Lupus Magnum on June 08, 2006, 09:05:56 PM
Archaological record:

Many eons ago the was a legendary first race, the first race to evolve in and inhabit this galaxy, from the very few artifacts recovered we know they called themselves the ZHNK-BRHMHE. Apperently the ZHNK-BRHMHE were a race of galactic empire builders that explored almost every part of the galaxy, but they felt alone, on a planet they dicovered, they saw an opportunity to see if they could create a companion race to aid them in there empire. The result was the DEHXDHN, the DEHXDHN helped their craitors into the Greater Magelenic Cloud, in a short time they became very intellegent, even more intelegent than their masters.

WAR!!! The empire was torn in half, the galaxy was in chaos, the DEHXDHN were winning, "they became too intellegent for their own good!", was a recovered document we managed to trade for.

The empire collapsed, the DEHXDHN had won, yet as quickly as they rised, they fell, invaders from another galaxy invaded, which weakened them, and then the last straw was that a supernova occured in the star their planet was orbiting.

Later speices evolved, more empires were built, and events happened that led to the galaxy we know today.


Title: Re: DEEP HISTORY
Post by: ars68 on June 08, 2006, 09:21:32 PM
very... interesting... and yet somewhat... disturbing somehow...  smee, your not writing this under an alias are you?  no?  well, I suppose it's true then, everyone does have an equal...  now I wonder where mine is :)


Title: Re: DEEP HISTORY
Post by: Smee on June 09, 2006, 04:13:58 AM
why would i need an alias lol, im not afraid to expres my self ^^ ahaah


Smee

now i need to finish reading it lol


Title: Re: DEEP HISTORY
Post by: Seither on June 10, 2006, 02:06:20 AM
Good, but you should try to make som more readable names...lol, otherwise I give it an A.


Title: Re: DEEP HISTORY
Post by: Lupus Magnum on June 12, 2006, 10:37:54 AM
well it's pretty hard to think of things right off the top of your head lol...


Title: Re: DEEP HISTORY
Post by: Seither on June 12, 2006, 05:10:19 PM
.....says you. I've never had any problems, lol. Plus, don't do it off the top of your head, take some time and think about it. Makes stuff sound a lot better too. Also, vowels are your friend.