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5 star rating  :atention:

i didnt read it alllllllll , but its verry go , at elast the part i read. :6:

lol, thanks, just read it when you get the time. But thanks for the comment and rating!

Wow...very good. very, very good. does this mean that seither has a girlfriend now?

*laughing jokingly* seither? a girlfriend? no way!  LOL :14:


actually, it was rather good, still wondering where me and DD was as zyggy and sriphoor tried to kill seither...  sure, I may have been asleep or something, but DD is the one that greeted seither o.O 

anyway, guess we will have to see...

DD was still at the command tower for the base, and you were not at the base. You'll see why in the next story.

ok, now you have my attention, what was I doing?  Tell me what I was doing! lol it wasn't anything... naughty... was it?   :)) :confused: :21: 0o :wow: :6: :14: hi

nah, nothing bad. But I can't say, it'll ruin part of my next story.

Ok......this story hasn't been read a lot....kinda sucks, but for those still sticking with me, I am proud to announce the title of my next story! Here it is folks:

Space Odyssey-Chronic Flux

I have no clue when this will be done, as I'm incredibly busy as of late (a rare occurance for me) and haven't done much writting, and most of that has been for my novel.

3/5
I guess I didn't like the fact that it's only G_Unit  :P

It isn't only G-unit, you obviously didn't read the whole thing, the other one had TH in it and Lightseeker, and this one has UEA in it. and of course it has G-Unit as a major part, as my character was from G-Unit, so they had to be implemented. It's called using a baises of fact to write fiction. Makes it more believable, lol. You're just made you aren't in it.

lol SorRy that kinda came out wrong  :6:

nah, I don't really like being mentioned in stories, I guess it makes me feel kinda wierd....  :))

lol. It's fine, I was poking at you. I know there are people that won't like my stories, I gladly accept that, but it was obvious you didn't read it all (of either of them, lol) if you thought it was all g-unit, as I make sure to include other alliances. In fact, in the next one, ars68 is the only G-unit member you'll see, while many other alliances are making a big apperance.

do we have a release date for chronuc flux?

as of right now, It is leaning towards the weekend after the 4th, though this may change.

*puts on a new suit in case he is being the diplomat*

*walks away from the mirror feeling he has forgotten something... something important*   :naughty:

or maybe I am just... cleaning house  :suck_kr:

as for right now... I shall stay in the middle of my vast mothership doing what commanders like me do best...
 :fishing1:
lol, jk.

anyway, ya, I can't wait to see it, see what you mean little boy is saying I may or may not have done...  :drunk:

 :tomato:  FINE FINE!!! I'll stop.  just... no more...  :tomato:  tomatoes :(

 :clapping: :clapping: :clapping: more more more!

was that more more for my story or for tomatos at ars?

ummm is this a trick qustion?

Hey, are the forgotten ancients in it?  :))  :P   :))
They're making a comeback.  :)  :P   :))
*pokes*  :))

I'm not telling, I just wish I had more free time, we're doing a lot of housework at the moment, so i haven't done much writing.

Oh! Very good work man! I really enjoyed this story.
This could make one kickass movie lol.
As a director, i see that it has potential. Keep up the good work.  :/

:suck_kr: Gah! Housewwork the very bane of my Existance!   :))

yes, and we've been doing so much now, that I've missed not only my deadline for this story, but for 4 chapters of another one, a novel. I'm starting to get some very angry letters.......lol. I'll try to finish the story soon, but thank all of you for your support...and comments...now, we need to rally a big group for this and make the next launch a big event, cause this story's launch was a major fizzle that deserved to be a big, huge, gigantic bang. I'll be working on the story all night tonight (ok, not ALL night, but most of it) and should be able to finish it. Then, and only then, will I dare give a release date, doing so ahead of time seems to be cursing me.

And thanks tinkerbell, but sadly, Hollywood thinks I'm a crack pot for suggesting these books be made into some sort of movie. nice try though.

Hey if i had more money id make it.
Being an indie filmaker gives you more freedom of creativity.
But ill put a link to the new story for ya!

That works. Oh, and for those who read my stories on my story site (just click the world icon) I add Ch. 3 & 4 to my Custom Weapons Battle story, after being a month overdue.

:21:  Hm... Interesting *waddles off in search of the link for this website*

ok, I know this is way off topic, but I suppose I should help out.  in your story, (the custom weapons battle one)
chapter 1, paragraph 3:
I think you mean "I mean Makashi Traning Academy"  right now it's like... "I'm mean.  Makashi Training..." lol

chapter 2, paragraph 4:
I think that is We will decide WHO gets them... lol, not he.

anyway, just thought you might want to know that, great story though, I really like it :)

Yea i went and checked them out.
Very very nice. I cant write near that well, i jsut make others do my scripts  :)

Thanks for pointing those out, I write a lot late at night, so sadly, mistakes happen, and word seems to have this problem of not catching them, yet telling me perfectly fine sentences are wrong.

And thank you tinkerbell. My only true talent is writing, everything else is medeocer.

 :)) I suck at everthing but dating, guitar, and filmaking.

you forgot photoshop to that list.

im gonna get 20x better cuz im getting photoshop cs

lol, I liked your story on fictionpress so much, I decided to join it 3 days ago so I could start putting my story up there to :)  (The Voyager)  lol, jk.  well, about your story being the only reason I put it up there.  lol.

lol, thanks....I think

maybe, you can never be sure with ars though.....

He said  he was just kiddng that that was the only reason he joined... that still means it was part of the reason he joined, meaning it was inspiring. Actually yeah you have a point .

lol, see what I mean, but I know, I just like annoying ars.

like my new gif?

lol, it's great.

ok, I'm almost done with Space Odyssey: Chronic Flux. I had a personal problem and had to take time away from everything else to deal with it, but now I'm back on track, so I hopefully will be finishing it soon. I'll let you know when it is done, and when the countdown for release shall begin.