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« Reply #15 on: June 27, 2006, 09:41:44 PM » |
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*puts on a new suit in case he is being the diplomat* *walks away from the mirror feeling he has forgotten something... something important*  or maybe I am just... cleaning house  as for right now... I shall stay in the middle of my vast mothership doing what commanders like me do best...  lol, jk. anyway, ya, I can't wait to see it, see what you mean little boy is saying I may or may not have done...   FINE FINE!!! I'll stop. just... no more... tomatoes  |
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« Reply #16 on: June 28, 2006, 01:02:15 AM » |
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« Reply #17 on: June 28, 2006, 08:29:05 AM » |
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was that more more for my story or for tomatos at ars?
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« Reply #18 on: June 29, 2006, 11:44:46 PM » |
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ummm is this a trick qustion?
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« Reply #19 on: July 01, 2006, 10:30:18 PM » |
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« Reply #20 on: July 08, 2006, 10:14:58 AM » |
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I'm not telling, I just wish I had more free time, we're doing a lot of housework at the moment, so i haven't done much writing.
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« Reply #21 on: July 11, 2006, 01:33:43 PM » |
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Oh! Very good work man! I really enjoyed this story. This could make one kickass movie lol. As a director, i see that it has potential. Keep up the good work.  |
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« Reply #22 on: July 12, 2006, 03:18:01 AM » |
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I'm not telling, I just wish I had more free time, we're doing a lot of housework at the moment, so i haven't done much writing.
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« Reply #23 on: July 13, 2006, 12:01:21 AM » |
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yes, and we've been doing so much now, that I've missed not only my deadline for this story, but for 4 chapters of another one, a novel. I'm starting to get some very angry letters.......lol. I'll try to finish the story soon, but thank all of you for your support...and comments...now, we need to rally a big group for this and make the next launch a big event, cause this story's launch was a major fizzle that deserved to be a big, huge, gigantic bang. I'll be working on the story all night tonight (ok, not ALL night, but most of it) and should be able to finish it. Then, and only then, will I dare give a release date, doing so ahead of time seems to be cursing me.
And thanks tinkerbell, but sadly, Hollywood thinks I'm a crack pot for suggesting these books be made into some sort of movie. nice try though.
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« Reply #24 on: July 13, 2006, 02:21:47 AM » |
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Hey if i had more money id make it.
Being an indie filmaker gives you more freedom of creativity.
But ill put a link to the new story for ya!
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« Reply #25 on: July 14, 2006, 06:09:57 PM » |
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That works. Oh, and for those who read my stories on my story site (just click the world icon) I add Ch. 3 & 4 to my Custom Weapons Battle story, after being a month overdue.
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« Reply #26 on: July 16, 2006, 03:26:11 AM » |
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That works. Oh, and for those who read my stories on my story site (just click the world icon) I add Ch. 3 & 4 to my Custom Weapons Battle story, after being a month overdue.
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« Reply #27 on: July 17, 2006, 02:42:30 PM » |
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ok, I know this is way off topic, but I suppose I should help out. in your story, (the custom weapons battle one) chapter 1, paragraph 3: “Yea, aren’t you? I’m mean Makashi Training Academy is the best around I think you mean "I mean Makashi Traning Academy" right now it's like... "I'm mean. Makashi Training..." lol chapter 2, paragraph 4: We will decide we gets them in the only fair way possible, a tournament. I think that is We will decide WHO gets them... lol, not he. anyway, just thought you might want to know that, great story though, I really like it |
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« Reply #28 on: July 18, 2006, 12:56:02 AM » |
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Yea i went and checked them out. Very very nice. I cant write near that well, i jsut make others do my scripts |
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« Reply #29 on: July 20, 2006, 01:54:38 AM » |
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Thanks for pointing those out, I write a lot late at night, so sadly, mistakes happen, and word seems to have this problem of not catching them, yet telling me perfectly fine sentences are wrong.
And thank you tinkerbell. My only true talent is writing, everything else is medeocer.
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