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« Reply #15 on: June 02, 2006, 06:09:54 AM » |
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 that was an AWSOME! story luffy. would make a great movie/mini series. but i want to know hwat happens next? were they obliterated in the explosion  or did they make it to the other side? guess i'll just have to wait till next season to see what new escapades you two get upto 
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Forfeit the game , Before somebody else Takes you out of the frame and Puts your name to shame, Cover up your face , You can't run the race, The pace is too fast,You just won't last!
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Seither
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« Reply #16 on: June 02, 2006, 06:49:03 AM » |
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yes, yes you will. There are clues left in the story hinting at what happened.
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Lammalord
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Lamma.
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« Reply #17 on: June 02, 2006, 09:12:19 AM » |
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oh oh its on page 2 now, can we get the second page, pretty cool story ingore Smee is a stubid head
wow your a really good righter, i never had the skill to do that, but appernly i know photoshop :p
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shaneblack
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« Reply #18 on: June 02, 2006, 10:28:48 AM » |
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If practice makes perfect, but nobodies perfect, why practice? Someone look at my story its the galactic history pleeez everyones loosing interest....   |
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Seither
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« Reply #19 on: June 02, 2006, 01:37:24 PM » |
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Relax, as soon as I finish chapter's 3 and 4 for my book (I am writing one, not SO related though. You can find it on my site (click the world icon, it'll wisk you to it), as well as a couple other things I've written (this is up there too, just without the pictures) I'll be starting another, though it'll be from another person's view most likely. And What Smee meant by falling asleep, and my waring, is that this is a long story for a forum. I'd give you an estimation of when I'll have it up, but with me, I never know.
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Lammalord
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« Reply #20 on: June 02, 2006, 07:22:20 PM » |
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wow you area a good writer :p
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Seither
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« Reply #21 on: June 06, 2006, 04:59:17 AM » |
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Thank you. Space Odyssey-When Stars Collide should be up shortly. Be on the look out for it!
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Lammalord
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« Reply #22 on: June 06, 2006, 09:51:46 AM » |
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i cheak for a new additon every 2 or so hours  nothing yet :S |
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« Reply #23 on: June 06, 2006, 10:26:20 AM » |
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Not THAT soon, it takes some time to write these things, and edit it. I'd say by the weekend at the earliest, as I have other things to do.
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Lammalord
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« Reply #24 on: June 06, 2006, 04:30:06 PM » |
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has it been a weekend yet?
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I like people...but it takes so long to cook one.
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« Reply #25 on: June 06, 2006, 10:01:45 PM » |
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Wow...i love it. Very well done, i applaude you and your creative ability. i hate to say this, really i do, but i think since this takes place in space, the distances at the end (the ones measured in yards) should be increased slightly. Say, lightminutes instead of yards. in space, yards is nothing. just thought i'd point that out. i know, i know, tiny detail...many apoligies...
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The question is not if I am prepared to meet my maker, but if he is ready to meet me...   |
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« Reply #26 on: June 07, 2006, 12:42:35 AM » |
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It is meant to be yards, I thought it over carefully. It fits...trust me. I can't say more, or I'll be giving away stuff in my next one.
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I like people...but it takes so long to cook one.
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« Reply #27 on: June 07, 2006, 09:23:28 AM » |
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meant to be in yards...? Ahhh! when is the next part coming out!?!?! now i am curious
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« Reply #28 on: June 07, 2006, 03:19:32 PM » |
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Hopefully this weekend, provided I get some more time to write. I've been busy with real life as of late, haven't had much time to do writing, but I'm trying my hardest to get it out in time, don't you worry.
Btw, the next one coming out (Space Odyssey-When Stars Collide) is going to be told from Seither's view again. I may switch for the one after that though, not sure yet.
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Lammalord
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« Reply #29 on: June 07, 2006, 06:12:38 PM » |
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real life pist who has that?
one day of school left.. not only that but i get out at like 10 am cant wait!
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